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Apr 08, 2009
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Dawning Daytrip
Crisp,
Damp,
A cool Silent suspense,
holding a mystery of anticipation.
Eloquence renewed,
dancing an age old welcome.
Calling with a tender kiss of promise.
Each dawn a daily encore,
overflowing from a wellspring of color.
Prayers painted within every moment.
Savage souls written in ancient patterns.
Feeling,
Learning,
each awakening shade.
Birthing a Regal Purple Passage,
threaded by Lavender and Lilac ribbon's.
Ripening like a sweet succulent Plum,
cleansing the Pitch of night with Apollo's light.
An ever evolving Blood Mandarin prose,
punctuated delicately with Apricot and Marigold.
The Celestial waves of Aqua heralding
Cerulean and Azure Blessings over the horizon.
Every morning suggesting a golden purpose.
Each Dawning offering inspiration,
illuminating a fresh and new Day trip.
Julie
D.D.
4/08/2009
Damp,
A cool Silent suspense,
holding a mystery of anticipation.
Eloquence renewed,
dancing an age old welcome.
Calling with a tender kiss of promise.
Each dawn a daily encore,
overflowing from a wellspring of color.
Prayers painted within every moment.
Savage souls written in ancient patterns.
Feeling,
Learning,
each awakening shade.
Birthing a Regal Purple Passage,
threaded by Lavender and Lilac ribbon's.
Ripening like a sweet succulent Plum,
cleansing the Pitch of night with Apollo's light.
An ever evolving Blood Mandarin prose,
punctuated delicately with Apricot and Marigold.
The Celestial waves of Aqua heralding
Cerulean and Azure Blessings over the horizon.
Every morning suggesting a golden purpose.
Each Dawning offering inspiration,
illuminating a fresh and new Day trip.
Julie
D.D.
4/08/2009
— DawningDaytripper, Apr 08, 2009
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Critiques
Morgana Tragic…
17 years 2 months ago
Stunning
Ink Dragon
17 years 2 months ago
Julie,
Ink Dragon
17 years 1 month ago
Perfect now, Julie!
themoonman
17 years 2 months ago
Julie...
Pixee
17 years 1 month ago
Hello Daytripper
Ink Dragon
17 years 1 month ago
Julie,
Seren
17 years 1 month ago
Just found
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 1 month ago
Julie,
Rett
17 years 1 month ago
Excellent work Julie
Hannah illiterate
17 years 1 month ago
Wow! Its about time to see
phoenixflame
17 years 1 month ago
Worthy of more than just five stars!
Nordic cloud
17 years 1 month ago
You have given yourself wings here
orgami
17 years 1 month ago
thought I had commented and posted stars Worthy worthy