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Backstabber!

You stand there and dance like the worlds a bliss

yet what you dont know is what will break you

I don't need you just go away I wont say anything

but dont force me to

Your just a silly brat and theres no need of that

you say I havent changed none hun?

look in a mirror and learn for yourself what you are

why let me tell you you'll just deny it and still live like it

don't tell me nothing, your opinion is pathetic and needless.

A girl like you should be were you belong

not here hurting those who trusted you

Like said you dont belong here go to a place way far away

maybe a circus or zoo where ever they send those people like you

will your world still be a bliss if I say what will break you?

dare you say I could never take you watch and wait

that cheerful little dance sure would stop.

Do I care?

oh yes I do, you just bit of to much to chew

backstab me i'll backstab you

liars and you all fit in a group call it what you may

yet i'll still say till the end of the day

dont you dare play unless your expeting to pay.

Now here you come as I watch in doubt

"Is she serious?She wants to end like this?"

i'll say it now right here to your face

to a hater and liar I will backstab you back!

Revenge is hateful and I dont normaly say this but you,

yes you, desverve this one boo!

— ANC1996, Apr 07, 2009

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Region, Country: Florida, ZZC

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Shakespeare, Homer.

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yenti

yenti

17 years 2 months ago

ANC

Well I don't want to get on the wrong side of you, anway young lady a very good write and full of dares to another, are you really asking for them to retaliate so that you can bop them one lol.This made a change to the normal things we have here and it was refreshing to say the least, well done, just the I missing in the following line:- Like (I) said you dont belong here go to a place way far away. Yours Ian.T
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Bosscombat

17 years 2 months ago

hey ANC

I can't be a critic on spelling nor grammar coz truth is, I suck at it and know nothing about poetry. but! I will say I thought this was raw! Your anger is a gift and you use it well! I was quite surprised to not find any explitives...I think I may be the only one I've come across that uses them :s anyways Awesome write! Kudos sister! Bosscombat
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AlexaGrace

17 years 2 months ago

um...

kind of cruel...