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SANCTUARY
I saw a broken branch on a small
Pear tree in my front yard
And I started to finish
breaking off this poor branch
But it was beginning to sprout
Little green leaves and I worried
About the tree feeling pain or fear
As they are living things
I used to worry about hurting trees
When I was a kid, too
They were my friends and I could climb
High up into their protecting branches
And hide from my grandmother whom I feared
The leaves would me cloak in regal silence
Where I could look down at my grandmother
As she would stand and angrily call my name
Looking for me in vain
Sometimes I would stay in my tree all afternoon
Waiting for my mother to come home
Then I could climb down from my safety up above
Where I was hidden from my hurtful world below
Today I tried to be a friend to a tree and save its
Loving branches from this hurtful world and to
Return a favor from many so years ago
Critiques
Arrow
17 years 2 months ago
It seems to me that lonely children
Linda Moses
17 years 2 months ago
Arrow
prayersbyPatty
17 years 2 months ago
Linda,
Linda Moses
17 years 2 months ago
Patty
Tonya
17 years 2 months ago
I love Trees
Linda Moses
17 years 2 months ago
Tonya
themoonman
17 years 2 months ago
Hi Linda...
Linda Moses
17 years 1 month ago
Richard