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Last Forever,

Walking down this road under this bright blue sky
laughing like we used to it feels so amazing
makes me wish this road had no end
you'd be my darlin' I'd be your boo
moments like these end to soon
forget our past don't mention the future
just let the rest of the world pass us by
we come to my house time to say goodbye
You say bye first and I'm soon to follow
suddenly i know its not imagination
my heart bout goes wild as you repeat it over again
beautiful as it was it was to fast to end
maybe this will stay the same
never any competition he could be mine and i could be his
back together someday with no end to the days
bring on the night ill be by your side
times like these make dreams seem silly
nothing could be better than now
you and me is all we'll need
let the world pass by you wont need an alibi
excuses,excuses, mine is you
love like this is bound to be doubted
but as long as there's you who gives a clue?

— ANC1996, Apr 05, 2009

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Region, Country: Florida, ZZC

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Shakespeare, Homer.

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Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

17 years 2 months ago

Hey again!

Anc, first off, I do have to agree with what Kesley said. Capitilization and grammar do matter here. It makes poems easier to read and better flowing. I have been guilty of bad punctuation, I'll be no hypcrite. But those who pointed it out to me were right. Other than that, it's a great poem, you had some awesome imagery and a sweet tone! I'm so glad you're enjoying Neo, you're fitting in here so well! We love having you! Peace and Love Katie
SR

Sydney Rae

17 years 2 months ago

Hay Hay!

Great job on this one! I have to agree with Kelsey and Katie and say look back over the grammar and capitilize what needs to be. I'm very guilty of it myself so if you catch me in the act let me know. lol. Anyhow great job and keep it up! Lots of Love, Syd
ANC1996

ANC1996

17 years 2 months ago

Thanks yall!

Ill be sure to start cecking my spelling and capitalization (however that word is spelled lol)Thanks guys yall are so awesome! Peace; ANC
Geezer

Geezer

17 years 2 months ago

i won't add

i won't add to what syd and katie said. i don't want you feeling better off dead. just wanted to say, "now have a good day!" just listen to 'katie and syd, i think you'll be glad that you did! keep pluggin' kid! you're doing great! gee.