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Villain vs. Hero

I like how,
Skeletor fucked with He-man
Probably just for fun,
Megatron fucked with Prime,
I liked it more
when Megatron won,
Superman fought Doomsday,
Ha ha! Doomsday tore superpooper a new one,
Its times like these
that keep me in comfort,
Man! I love it
when the villain is triumphant,
Although its not my intention
To bring our heroes shortcomings to attention
It has to be said, I think it is needed
Its about time a villain was created who succeeded.
Who gets what they want
and are shrouded in glory.
Coz' in the end its the villain
who will make or break your story.
— Bosscombat, Apr 04, 2009

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Seren

17 years 2 months ago

I like it

I like it ... But it needs some work im a good friend but im no critic theres a couple of parts that just didnt flow for me ... I got told some good advice a couple of weeks ago it really does work ... Read it out loud and when it dont flow to the rhythm (you know what i meen)LOL we muso's .. then it needs work ... sorry thats the only way i know how to say it :P Love you JayC x x
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Bosscombat

17 years 2 months ago

Yeh I know. Im not a fan of

Yeh I know. Im not a fan of this poem. I couldn't get the flow right while I was writing it...that's some good advice, next time im near a pc ill try and edit it :) Thanks hun <3
Seren

Seren

17 years 2 months ago

it really

does work hun try it ... my scribbles have improved heaps i sit back and read it a few times and if the rhythm dont feel right i work on it till it does .. Luvluv JayC