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There Are . . .

There are days
that songs are stifled
or the throat hoarse and weary
No more do notes glide softly -
raking leaves strewn across
the littered lawn
their butterfly wings
hung up in the wait
for another sunny day.

There are nights
that stars squander
their luminescence
on unappreciative lovers
roaming listlessly by
a moonlit shore
their brilliant points
curl up in the hope
of another cloudless night.

There are mornings
that sizzle on the stove
that sparkle sweet tangy-ness
hands clasping across the table
reliving life's love-filled moments
the warmth of the kitchen
reflects fervent esteem
done up in various colours
for each new morning.
— crypticbard, Apr 03, 2009

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Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

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Arrow

17 years 2 months ago

"Fervent esteem"-

possibly the best description of love I've ever heard. I am ambivalent about this poem - not in the liking of it but whether I would like it better if the lines were longer. Given a breath at the end of each line, it reads a little choppy for me. However, all the line breaks do create a series of vivid images that might be somewhat lost in longer lines. Thankfully, I am not the decision-maker here. Much enjoyed.
Frederick Kesner

Frederick Kesner

17 years 2 months ago

Thank you

Thank you for your kind words. And also much appreciation for the insight into how the poem in its present form has come across to you. That is an invaluable bit of information and encouragement.