Shattered

This is a great piece for such a young poet. I absolutely love your first 3 stanzas, simple but powerful. the heart that lay broken stitched back in places a heart that was in hands was loved then replaced Gotta be my other fave stanzas. All around, a great write for your age! Never fear to ask for any advice from the other poets, we're always willing to help and always willing to talk! Keep the poetry coming! Peace and Love Katie

Good job on this one - you really have surpassed your age limit in finding the right words for this one. I read this before I found out your age and I was thinking after reading this that you were around 16. I'm very glad that you're interested in improving your skills, I wish I had wrote more as I was growing up. By the time you get my age you'll be an excellent poet! ;-) I liked the stanzas at the beginning the most - probably because I've been in similar situations where I've kept things to myself rather than talked about them. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work! Also, if you want to see Katie's stuff - you can click on her screenname right above the comments she left for you and that will take you to her profile. ;-) Misty

This is great! You're wonderful for such a young age. I'm 16 and i still ain't that good. Keep it goin' girl!

like katie and syd, i think you are going to be really great by the time you get to be thier age! however, by the time you get to my age,you should be a legend! hey! i am a legend in my own mind! really great work. remember,beauty is a matter of perception. gee