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Dreams eh?!

He trekked up toward the city lights,
to see the scorpions and all the others,
thick smoke in the air,
dreadlocks in his hair,
and tattooed to the nines,
all but covered.
Marlboro man,
imitation remains to be seen,
briskly strolling,
swigging at a bottle of beam,
He wears a tangled beard
and oversized glasses
to hide his face from sight
he was still walking into the city
as the day turned to night
He spots the scorpions,
down by the water,
wildly slipping cognac
around a well lit fire.
Each wore blue leather shoes,
and a matching tattoo,
all bound by covert codes
and similar attire.
They like women and music,
smoking cigarettes,
they like drinking their booze
and dabbling in phets,
its blood in blood out .
He shuffles down the rocky hill
They all spun round
and broke out in laughter
His blue shoes shiney as ever
made from fine leather,
the talk was fresh
it had been a while.
There was much chatter of family and friends
and softly spoken tales of tieing loose ends
"hey man, where 'ave you been?" he was asked
His eyes welled up as he spoke
tales of his recent experiences in life
"those bastards came to my home,
tied up my children
and sliced up my wife!"
dreams eh
 
— Bosscombat, Apr 02, 2009

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Geezer

Geezer

17 years 2 months ago

dreams,eh?

i like the theme of it being dream, like one of those i wake up from and want nothing more than to go back to sleep and continue. you write as though you have been there. [your business] just want to let you know, it was very realistic. good write! beauty is a matter of perspective. gee
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Bosscombat

17 years 2 months ago

Hey Gee

Thanks a lot mate for the kind words! This was a dream I had not 2 nights ago. Was sort of scary in a way. Anyway thank you again. Im off to read your work! Bosscombat
Seren

Seren

17 years 2 months ago

Matty

I think this is one of my favourites .... It describes a man we both know LOL ... Funny how different people read things and interpret differently ... You have my number LOL next time ya get weirded out ring me I'm always awake you know that :P Anyway .. I am no critic we know that lol but i will say that i can see your work improving and growing ... I am loving that you have gotten so into it .. Whats even better we can share our work and commiserate our failures lmao... Love ya Matty JayC