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Apr 01, 2009
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Winter (A Tanka)
Winter (A Tanka)
Winter brings us snow
Icy flakes floating down
Covering the ground
Bringing joy to children
And misery to adults
Winter brings us snow
Icy flakes floating down
Covering the ground
Bringing joy to children
And misery to adults
— Rett, Apr 01, 2009
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Rett
17 years 2 months ago
*LOL* Double D.
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Oh no I LOVE the snow
Rett
17 years 2 months ago
*LOL* Sometimes the child in all of us
Bosscombat
17 years 2 months ago
Hey Rett
Rett
17 years 2 months ago
Thanks BC
Rett
17 years 2 months ago
Thank you Janice
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Dry snow!