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Poetic soul, 31, seeks union
communion, companion
for walks in the park
whispers in the dark
fingers that linger and long
to trace the lines
that time has etched
to delve into places
long left untouched
to tease her to screaming
share in her dreaming
holding her hand, in this land
on this journey.
Yummy mummy wishes for kisses
the kind that make a soul soar
for eyes to see the heart of her
for arms to embrace the parts of her
that still need healing
to start her laughing
leaving her reeling
bowled over by love.
Husband sought, by wife
for friendship, for life
for wondering with
for growth in the light
for fathering tomorrrows
bridges over sorrows
loving deliverance
deliberate lovingness
for this nothingness to be full
of articulated hope.
Beauty compounded with bravery
leading her to this place
of readiness
a willingness to enter
and
be
entered.
Critiques
themoonman
17 years 2 months ago
Faerybeki...
faerybeki
17 years 2 months ago
Thanks Richard, have great
Nathaniel Radcliffe
17 years 2 months ago
An enjoyable piece.
faerybeki
17 years 2 months ago
Thanks Nathaniel for reading
Craig Norris
17 years 2 months ago
nice one Bek
faerybeki
17 years 2 months ago
LOL! :) Thanks Craig glad
Kailashana
17 years 2 months ago
Ha! Since I’m exactly
faerybeki
17 years 2 months ago
Hi Anna, so sorry I seem to
Ink Dragon
17 years 2 months ago
Definitely finished, Beki!
faerybeki
17 years 2 months ago
Hi Nina, please don’t