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Red River Flood

The Red River has had more than its fill;
It heaves chunks of ice through bedroom windows,
leaves its banks with fierce intension to spill
the very last remnant of winter snows.

Folks strain to contain its far-flung fury; 
chain-gangs struggle against the river’s will
lest friends and animals they must bury;
Men heave the sandbags, plug leaks they can fill.

As the torn rogue river slowly recedes,
weathermen call for more snow tomorrow;
unless snow stops falling and ice is freed,
everyone is in for further sorrow.

More snow is coming, more pressure at hand.
Sub-zero temperatures, double edged sword,
will slow the flow, but freeze the thirsty land.
Their fate now lies in the hands of the Lord.
— deelilah, Mar 31, 2009

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Region, Country: Northwest USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.E. Cummings, Robert W. Service, Emily Dickenson

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Rett

Rett

17 years 2 months ago

Deelilah

I have been following this on the news and on the net. They are having a really terrible time there. I feel for them. They are battling a frozen hell while others are worrying about global warming. Now as for the poem. I found it very factual and a very good read. The flow of it was very good and the language use was great. Well done my friend. Respectfully, Rett: "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein For the sake of children, read this. http://www.neopoet.com/node/19905
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 1 month ago

Hi Rett

Sorry it took me so long to get back to you. The time is whizzing by as fast as the country. The water was still high last week in Fargo, probably the worst is over now. Two days ago the I 80 was closed at Cheyenne, Wy, due to blizzard conditions; but today in LA, it's 100 degrees. Go figure. A lot's been going on since I visited the site. Congrats on AEC. Hope to talk again soon. Deelilah