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Inner Combat (unmasked).

HA HA! CHECKMATE!
SEE! LOOK! I have you beat!
You're beat cold,
From the hair on your head
To the soles of your feet

They say "There's no rest for the wicked"
Yeah?! Well the fiend lives inside me
For I am the beholder
The martyr and the marksman
The soldier and all

YEAH! I SAID CHECKMATE!
By the by, I treasured my deceit
ACCEPT DEFEAT!
You're too proud,
FALL, I said I have you beat!

I said "FUCK YOU AGAIN...LITTLE MAN"
The little man is me
The little man with the pain in his gut
With the clenched fist,
a wild eye


Well, I can't escape what I've become
Of all the old battles, lost and won
Of all the days and nights
the Falls and fights
The war rages on

Because there's still that monster in the back of my brain,
That won't let me forget and reminds me again
"Don't let it tumble down,
Don't let 'em in,
Your too strong to show you're weak, my friend"

CHECKMATE! Louder than ever
I've knocked over the king
Tighten my helmet straps after the battle
HA HA! My facade larger than life
But with a tongue as sharp as a knife

I scream when the smoke clears:

"Only to myself I realize it
Only to myself I admit it
I know where I came from
And I know how to survive
I know WHAT I am
But who am I really?
Apart from what I despise."
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— Bosscombat, Mar 30, 2009

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Seren

Seren

17 years 2 months ago

Matty

I can see this as a song you really should show the boy's .... I dont know what it is the way you've writen it but i really think you need to try and put this one to music ... Sorry for the delay in commenting and rating went to sleep last night :O shock horror I actually got some sleep and when i woke up had to take yuka (yuka being warrens(fish's) new japanese fiance lol) shopping so I hadn't had a chance to have a good read till just now ... luvluv <3 JayC Oh i forgot to say very good poem i like it and you really should try to put it to music I got a feeling it might make a good song ...
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Bosscombat

17 years 2 months ago

lol

Nahhh no music to this one....it might go ok as a song but I dunno if id be comfortable with it. Should tell fish we said congrats! Well done on the sleep...any hot tips? <3
Seren

Seren

17 years 2 months ago

Fair enuff :P

No worries but if you did set it to music the lyrics can be our little secret hahaha ... Well you and me and how many people are here ?? pmsl .... Will give your regards to the fishman hahaha he looks like the cat that ate the canary at the moment LOL .... mmmmmm Hot tips i dont know what your meen like um who looks good in the sixth race lmao ... I am assuming you meen poetry ... Only tip i can give you so far is go with your gut listen to people and take in what they say etc punctuation etc .... But if people's advice dont meld with how you want your poem to go ?? Stick with what you like cause at the end of the day It's your poem ... And dont change it to suit someone else as it is at heart changing it to their work ... luvluv <3 JayC mwahzzzzzzzzzzz hahaha
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Bosscombat

17 years 2 months ago

hey sj!

Thanks for the feedback! Hope you don't know that feeling too well. When I can get near a pc ill read your work! Thanks again! BossCombat