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Mar 30, 2009
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Where does hope go?
It trickles off the pavement
Like an iridescent oil film
That dances on the backs of raindrops
In great supply….
Until a deluge of disappointment comes,
Washing away
the delicate strands
of shining rainbows
That disappear down the drain…
Becoming swallowed by darkness,
Where the interference of light
is put to an end.
— Blue_Halcyon, Mar 30, 2009
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themoonman
17 years 2 months ago
Blue Halcyon...
Geezer
17 years 2 months ago
where does hope go?
Morgana Tragic…
17 years 2 months ago
This has a deep meaning,
Shonna James
17 years 2 months ago
Definately agree with Katie,