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How Others Do It


I wonder how other poets do it,
those happily married,
living in Paradise,
enough money to get by
and on,
vacationing in 4-star hotels
in Paris, France
or pitching a yurt on the banks
of the Nile,
writing of joy
only of joy,
while I am
alone,
living by the skin of my teeth,
dreaming of white sand
and Hawaiian ginger and gardenia
blossoms,
asleep in no one’s arms.

I wonder what poems I’d write
if I had another life,
what poems would define me.

I wonder who made
me
the poet I am.


— Kailashana, Mar 29, 2009

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prayersbyPatty

17 years 2 months ago

Anna

I know that feeling that you have. Good poem, I enjoyed it. Yes, some people are enjoying the good life, but its all worldly, earthly things. I have struggled all my life, the only thing I learned is to enjoy what you do have and not wish for what appears to be the good life. Its all fake. The eye of the needle Anna If you had all that you probably would not take the time to write, you have a gift that money cannot buy. take care, Patty
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 2 months ago

Thanks Patty…. I’m

Thanks Patty.... I'm feeling quite useless however, taking some much needed time away from my all my groups. I wonder what's going to happen to *Anna* now. Thanks for reading and the kind words. Much love. "We have to try to get rid of the notion of time. And when you have an intense contact of love with nature or another human being, like a spark, then you understand that there is no time and that everything is eternal." Paulo Coelho
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 2 months ago

I’m going to a city club

I'm going to a city club meeting this morning for my Middle East Peace Forum, wrote a poem this morning that I cannot post due to the 24/hr. rule. So I'll post it here. Welcome back Lonnie, Be well my friends, all the (un)usual suspects at NEOPOET. Words. Words words are like mortar between bricks made into walls between us, sometimes they crumble with age I once lived in a glass house stood on the inside a stranger threw rocks I knew not then it was me, I am homeless now lost, a wave in the sea, You are the sun and stars I am the rain the ground of dissolution is a word of kindness spoken from the heart. "We have to try to get rid of the notion of time. And when you have an intense contact of love with nature or another human being, like a spark, then you understand that there is no time and that everything is eternal." Paulo Coelho
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 2 months ago

Anna

Don't give up, I love this one and it helped to know the background of it. Wow, such an inspiration. Post this as soon as you can 5 wowsers........ Patty
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Anna...

Hugs and more Hugs to ya! Your inner spirit has made you the well-rounded poet you are... generous and strong... have I told you I love your writing? Richard
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

You can keep your 4 star

You can keep your 4 star hotels, I prefer the smaller places where one comes into contact with local people, hotels are not worth entering, unless one is prepared to play the role of the hotel visitor. My parents once said that we were going into that hotel, pointing to it, and when we get in there your must make sure you hold your knife and fork properly and don't do this, and don't do that..by which time I was not in the least interested to visit that hotel and have always felt awkward in them, or felt like doing something naughty to antagonise them. But to the other side of the poem, oh Anna, oh Anna, how can such a person as yourself be without someone to be near you? I cannot understand that, you seem so outward going and so charming, so full of poetry and enjoyment of the things that are of worth in life. I often think of myself and ask why do I deserve such luck as I suppose its luck, I don't know, I have had many loves in my life and would not have been without any of them, they are there in my heart forever - don't know how they would get on if they met each other there, oh what a thought!!! I have always liked the company and challenge of men, and am not a woman's woman, not a womens lib person either, I believe in helping those who are grossly mishandled and discriminated, yes, but I am glad men are men I love them so. Are there not any here who wish to creep up on that beach you are lying on and surprise you with paradise? Yours Ann of Norway
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Ink Dragon

17 years 2 months ago

Anna,

I thought I had already commented on this piece. Must have forgotten to hit submit... Anyhow, I love this speculative write. What if... I cannot say what either of us would write If our lives had taken different turns neither can I answer your question Who made us We will have to dive down into our own dark depths And look for the shell that holds The pearl, the answer, there (Note: I may need someone to push me) Yours, ~Nina “Like plumbers and dentists, poets are fallible, and the possibility of genuine nonsense cannot be ruled out.” (Mark Haddon)
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Arrow

17 years 2 months ago

Great poem.

Futile question, I think. I think poets, in particular, have a disproportionately high rate of mood disorders so I'm not sure where the contented ones are. Maybe that's why you don't know; you can't find any to ask! Ah well, everything can be lost in an instant. Best to just enjoy what you have. Some good things remain.