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Mar 29, 2009
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My Dreams with my Shadow
My Dreams with my Shadow
It is a dream with my shadow
dull and shabby with tears
N o segment as past and present
Pains and strugglings continued there
Tried to wake up and tried to move away
I've failed ,failed
There I was sleeping as a log
Hunger haunted and
Fear swallowed me as it's prey
Dark ,nothing is there except dark
Threatened me
to lie as a log in my bed for long
Sakthi S Ravichandran
It is a dream with my shadow
dull and shabby with tears
N o segment as past and present
Pains and strugglings continued there
Tried to wake up and tried to move away
I've failed ,failed
There I was sleeping as a log
Hunger haunted and
Fear swallowed me as it's prey
Dark ,nothing is there except dark
Threatened me
to lie as a log in my bed for long
Sakthi S Ravichandran
— SAKTHEEE2007, Mar 29, 2009
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Geezer
17 years 2 months ago
dreams and shadows