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How I Come With What I know

I come with it beyond majestic sceptics creating hectic through scare tactics by heckling the masses till they obey they masters to create habitual disasters that rip through you with amazing fastness to rip through the critical point in tune with the decisiveness of a harpoon to attack but only the bad rap I ridicule so don’t call me no loon I know what I’m doing even when being cynical with no lack of a righteous past that even Jesus would have been glad to have had better then a second hand lumber jack better then having a mother whore on her back soon for these words some mediocre second hand man on the attack for bashing up Christianity like that but I know the true legitimacy using focal ocular telepathy x ray vision that’s got the whole government recruiting all legitimately the best tacticians to immediate my symptoms before I expedite my mission letting every citizen know they have eternal right to fight for what is right because we only live once so we must not succumb to the reluctant assuming cunts with abundant religions who exploit the monetary system as many other deployed business hereditary decisions taking too much of the worlds inhabitants debating through such of the hurled cabbages to create world masses that be brainwashed so society can grow illegitimately to infinity working as a slave for corporate monopolies contractively equal in similarity to what western culture defines as now atrophic autocracy but fortunately for them they be making mass amounts of mitotic ethnically diverse money legally do to a society founded on greed by rewarding reliably unreliable materials , dumping oil rather then properly disposing of the atrocities viable undeniable rape and damage of the soil retrospectively the royal are killing us all its check and mate they’ve got us by the balls time to reach out and recall passionately   


— mdehe, Mar 28, 2009

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17 years 2 months ago

I'm out of my element here

but I did want to acknowledge that I read this (aloud). There were a couple of places where I thought you stretched it too far for the sake of rhyme (e.g., "focal ocular telepathy," "disposing of the atrocities viable"). But, maybe this is the style. I like the title and the ending and think they tie together well. As for internal logic, you've poked at many of the culture's hotspots, which I assume was the aim. Hopefully, someone with more experience in this form will give you some additional feedback. Welcome to the site.