themoonman

Mar 28, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Feeling the love

Every time I witness it
I tingle from inside
Every time I think of it
I'm glad to be alive
Every time I question it
she tells me that it's mine
and then I get to feel it
my Honey's lovely smile

— themoonman, Mar 28, 2009

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Critiques

Wafi

17 years 2 months ago

Feeling The Love.

A short but sweet and lovely piece. Smiled while reading it :) Sincerely, Wafi

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Wafi...

thank you for that smile! Your presence here is greatly appreciated...

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Thank you Julie... I loved the extra lines but I don't think I'll change it just yet... but maybe... pure magic... now that is the way it warms me at times... thanks... by the way, love your picture... beautiful girls... Richard

orgami

17 years 2 months ago

What a great poem Moonman

this is a beautiful read

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Hi Orgami...

thanks man, glad you liked it.

Arrow

17 years 2 months ago

Charming,

cheering. I think ending on a kiss is right. "its" --> "it's"

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Hi Arrow...

thank you for catching that... and the its.

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

All we can do is sigh

And say that we know what you mean and luckily have experienced the feelings and the joy. Nice. Ann.

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Ann...

thanks Ann, by the way, I love your smiling picture.

Ink Dragon

17 years 2 months ago

Richard,

what a sweet little write! Turning green with envy when reading "Every time I question it/she tells me that it´s mine", wish I had someone who said that to me (Every time no less!). By the way: a little apostrophe would be appropriate here. Holding the apostrophe tin at the ready for your use, ~Nina

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Nina...

thank you for holding that tin, I used it! and don't be green, maybe my wife is just crazy... lol... oh, here she comes.

nokros

17 years 2 months ago

Feeling the love

just love a man who adores his wife - soulful write.

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Nokros...

thank you for that, as I truly do adore that woman... she is the best time in life that I have known, and she still likes me, well, most of the time....lol... Richard

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Hi Janice...

thank you for commenting, I am glad you liked my little love poem... I didn't get my computer running, I had to buy a new one and I consider myself the computer maintenance man around here... but the motherboard failed and it would have cost as much as a new one in the long run to fix... besides, it was a Gateway, and they are out of business... thanks Richard

infinite_dwarf

17 years 2 months ago

Moonie

So nice to see such devotion. Loved this write! ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"The truth is, it doesn't matter what you do. 'Til you gaze in that mirror with an eye that's true. And admit that what scares you is the me in you..." - Steve Earle

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Hiya Jess...

thank you... glad you liked it! that Steve Earle quote... is that from a song?

infinite_dwarf

17 years 2 months ago

yep

Steve Earle's "The Truth" ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"The truth is, it doesn't matter what you do. 'Til you gaze in that mirror with an eye that's true. And admit that what scares you is the me in you..." - Steve Earle

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago