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A walk into Spring

The air is heavy, odour-torn

with blossom-sprinkled, sweat-soaked grass,

and petalled trees dipped in the spawn

that bathes new life with droplet glass

full-brimmed, in morning’s scent-brushed swathes

of warmth and honeyed rose-lipped haze.

 

Soft colours spread in saffroned light

of rising sun and flesh-tinged sky,

infuse each scene with new insight,

and flood all other worlds run dry

with sucking thoughts and blotted past,

each vision drunk as though my last.

 

No human tongue to break this round

of nature’s calls, whose chattered song

plays urgent music’s fluted sound,

reverberates all morning long;

clamouring food for throated nests,

bursting with life that never rests.

 

Fine-dusted breeze thrills every pore

of down-blown skin and brimming eye

that floats my senses through their door,

and leaves each care a passer-by

who walks into this spring-flushed dawn

where night’s undone, and hope’s reborn.



— professor, Mar 27, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: China/Sichuan/Chengdu, CHN

Favorite Poets: Yeats, Elliot, Auden, Keats, Shelley, Byron

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Seren

Seren

17 years 2 months ago

Painting

Ive often heard the phrase "painting a picture with words" .. and thats what this poem does for me .. Beautiful .. Makes me want the spring to hurry back round to our side of the earth LOL Sincerely Jayne-Chloe
professor

professor

17 years 2 months ago

Thanks Jayne-Chloe

you are not the first to liken me to an artist painting with words and i am happy to be described that way since it is often what i am trying to achieve in my poetry. This one does describe an actual experience of walking out of my house and out into the fields at dawn on a bright spring day and i tried to capture all that my senses took in. Glad you enjoyed it. Keith