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A walk into Spring
The air is heavy, odour-torn
with blossom-sprinkled, sweat-soaked grass,
and petalled trees dipped in the spawn
that bathes new life with droplet glass
full-brimmed, in morning’s scent-brushed swathes
of warmth and honeyed rose-lipped haze.
Soft colours spread in saffroned light
of rising sun and flesh-tinged sky,
infuse each scene with new insight,
and flood all other worlds run dry
with sucking thoughts and blotted past,
each vision drunk as though my last.
No human tongue to break this round
of nature’s calls, whose chattered song
plays urgent music’s fluted sound,
reverberates all morning long;
clamouring food for throated nests,
bursting with life that never rests.
Fine-dusted breeze thrills every pore
of down-blown skin and brimming eye
that floats my senses through their door,
and leaves each care a passer-by
who walks into this spring-flushed dawn
where night’s undone, and hope’s reborn.
Critiques
Seren
17 years 2 months ago
Painting
professor
17 years 2 months ago
Thanks Jayne-Chloe