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crypticbard
crypticbard
Mar 26, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Waterfront Solitude

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Less than a bell's tinkle
fainter than a whistle
stars in the sky twinkle
your breath a hushed whisper

O the tiniest sparkle
dapple on glassy water
far from distant heckles
my soul freed from shackles




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— crypticbard, Mar 26, 2009

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Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

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17 years 2 months ago

This brings back a very fond memory

of standing with my sig other in the silent cold and watching the Pleides shower very early one morning. I think "dapple" should be "dapples" but there is nothing else to suggest here. Lovely.