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Heavenly Influence

Earth's timeless power imbued by nature,
Teaches twilight's fire to pirouette
With tongue flamed edges,
Forging embered light
Into a radiant, spectral crown.

Thawing time's frozen wisdom
To rain down upon the earth
as shattered water,
In subservient thought,
Creating ripples along the streams
of our consciousness.

Evasive words, once clouded in obscurity,
Now illuminated by Inspiration's light,
For Creation's spark fuels this blazing fire
Washing my soul in the colors
Of this divine, celestial wonder.
— Blue_Halcyon, Mar 23, 2009

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Region, Country: Florida, USA

Favorite Poets: Sylvia Plath, Rumi, Kahlil Gibran, Edgar Allen Poe, Lewis Carrol, Yeats, Bukowski, Langston Hughes, Johanne Wolfgang von Goethe, ect.

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Geezer

Geezer

17 years 2 months ago

colors

the colors of your mind are awesome to behold, you use a raging palette, colors strong and bold. the hand that strokes the canvas of my brain, shows me blue skies,clouds pouring silver rain. your eyes devine,my sight is yours, this grey mind, takes me on tours, i am blinded temporaily, i say to you, oh, verily... let me come with you some more,through that open door, to see the bombs of light,you give me second sight. keep on keeping on. gee
Blue_Halcyon

Blue_Halcyon

17 years 2 months ago

hehehe

Looks like you were inspired gee! ;-) I'm glad you enjoyed the poem - I enjoyed your impromptu poem as well. :-D
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orgami

17 years 2 months ago

Aurora

made me think of the Borealis Aurora-is the great line for me of your poem is thus "Into a radiant, Spectral crown" very appeasing to my memory for its been some months since last seeing the faint vestiges beyonnd our city haze of light Very great poem Blue