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A Limbo Before Hell
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A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man

— Sinbadthesailorman, Mar 23, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

Critiques

Mike5242

17 years 2 months ago

Totally confused...

OK I'm befuddled I suggest you seek yenti's or Ann Harvey or Themoonman's council on your rhythm rhyme and sensicalness They Helped me a bunch and I'm certain they can help you :) otherwise you must have been quite upset when writing this hope you feeling better :)

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 2 months ago

I am still working on this

I work out of the Libaray and some times you'll get the whole process from start to completion because I have many things about me at all times. I only get 240 mins. a day A block of 60 and then 15 min at a time when any one can bumb me as the have today bare whith me it takes me some time. Up to a week to get these things near complete I am sorry I don't have any other way of doing this so they are sometimes rough for a long while. Donnie/ Sinbad

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 5 months ago

I fixed it up some hope it is clearer to you now

I get lost much of the time, in my own little world of maeham and disorder. So I lose touch with every little thing from time to time. As for I too find I am continuely chasing my mind. So I don't doubt any one esles confusion as I stand on a tower of babel myself. Hope these changes make it a little clearer Donnie/Sinbad And no I was not upset when I wrote it maybe tired though. I feel about the same as I always did with my fingers and my toes,because still my heart is in a constant state of repair. It was badly damaged on its last attact, but it shall recover some day. Hope you had a great Holiday (s) Mike. TTFN