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WE ALL WALK TOGETHER
As I walk there are so many people, that I meet?
Their eyes show a window with a soul with hopeless feeling of free
So much sadness in their world
Why do they look down and not at me
How can I just walk by
When I feel the same pain inside
As we walk by
Every one of them seems to walk with pride
And with every foot step is a false motion in their stride
Leaves the imprint from the pain
From all the mistakes in life they have made
Why should I let their sorrow inter my life?
When my on soul
Is not in my mind
Moreover, every day
There is a new problem in my life
For my love was tested time after time
It would be so much safer to walk away
And deal with only me
However, will I leave a part of my life that I need
And will my soul be left behind
Just like the eyes that are sad so much like mys
Was the world meant to live this way
All of our pains are just the same
We all walk with in this time
When will we know the only safety is a love that binds?
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