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Woe Is Me

I guess I have angered the poetry god
I have posted two poems and I got
No stars or comments one the last one
Oh, come on, I  can't be that bad, this is not fun
The other one I actually got two comments but no stars
On that one either. No stars, not even one. Have I been barred

Although not as much as I used to
I still read and give comments and stars to you and you
What can the matter be, tell me true
I can feel myself fading away
What else can I say
— Linda Moses, Mar 22, 2009

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Region, Country: Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: rethinking this. have recently started reading the works of some of the greats, I will comment later

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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 2 months ago

Ha! We all feel that way

Ha! We all feel that way sometimes....and then there are CERTAIN people here whose poems ALWAYS elicit stars and spotlights. (THEY shall be nameless for the purpose of this whining.) I belong(ed) to many poetry & yahoo groups... never quite know when & if a poem will float someone's boat... After my early demise, I shall be famous, I tell you... people will say "SHE'S ALIVE!!.. Lol & hugs... I've been working away from a computer 24/5 so it's impossible to catch up and I return to my personal hell tomorrow, after *negotiating*. Thanks for letting me vent on your vent. ;-) ~A
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 2 months ago

Anna

Thank you for your comments. I am behind, also as I have returned to work full time also. glad to hear from you. Long and happy life to Anna, and her poetry Sincerely. Linda
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 2 months ago

you too?

I agree with Anna... especially her first point. Oh well. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"The truth is, it doesn't matter what you do. 'Til you gaze in that mirror with an eye that's true. And admit that what scares you is the me in you..." - Steve Earle
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 2 months ago

HI Jess

After I named my little pity poem Woe Is Me, I noticed you had one by that name, I would have named it something different. Has Death of A Poet been used before? or was that Death Of A Salesman? Sincerely, Linda
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orgami

17 years 2 months ago

when and where I comment I give fives

because for me the fact that a person is brave enough to put something together from the heart and post it for open critiquing is damn stalwart I came here from reading years of proper poetry from people who are famous I just couldnt write well So I myself practised for a long long time probably why I can create them so fast (although last nights was wiped out) Weirdelf I go back to him when he states its our responsibility to comment and to comment on the poem in honest terms to help better us as poets I see that a lot of people here know more about poetry the true mechanics then I do and people just do develop with more writing here and a natural voice evolves from them by either being inspired here or by writing style or intervention of spirit I feel quilty for not commenting enough and im guilty on doting on some thanks for bringing this important message to me once again I shall go back over your poems as I do when I need too to catch up on Poets thank you
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 2 months ago

Orgami

You and your work are admired and appreciated. Sincerely, Linda
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R.M.Shanmugam

17 years 2 months ago

this poem realy merits for

this poem realy merits for stars. it is not that only the starred one is worth .shan
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 2 months ago

I concur Linda

On all of the above, thinking, our gang is busy.... I have many poems that have no stars or comments. But the worth is getting them out there and that should make you feel better. Just can't keep up as I get older and the hamster wheel goes faster and faster. Look back at what you did for you. Read them over and never stop posting..... we may be famous some day........ smiles, Patty
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 2 months ago

Ill give Five star on true feelin alone, if you really need them

Be very mindful of your own worth, It is all that turely matters, for when you are lit and on fire who will dare try and put you out, least they get burned sometimes we must stop, drop, and roll and put our own fires out but, yes we all desire to be seen if not heard this is a good write I like it but, who am I Sinbad /Donnie
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 2 months ago

Donnie

thank you for your comments, I like comments, and corrections. stars are nice, I know not all my writes deserve 4 or 5 stars. I guess it was the being ignored that bothered me. Thanks, Donnie