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note to lost lovers, friends

you have no graves
to shrug into slowly

you instead starve in jungles
living on scraps, muttering

carving out your own moon.
— whitetea, Mar 22, 2009

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Chrystos, Mark Strand, Adrienne Rich, Naomi Shihab Nye, Rachel M. Simon, Donald Justice, Mary Oliver, Nikki Giovanni, Alice Walker, Bukowski, Mary Lambert

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professor

professor

17 years 2 months ago

Lovers who are lost or lost lovers?

This is a lovely cameo no one else seems to have seen. I especially like the last line. "Carving out your own moon" thats a great image i have to say. Best wishes Keith