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shazbat
shazbat
Mar 21, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Mindscape

Walk around in my mind
And I'm sure you will find
Just space from ear to ear
With a tiny patch of grey cells
Whose function is not clear
You'll maybe meet some creatures
With loathsome facial features
And bodies that defy all natures rules
Take a walk in my mind
And I'm sure you will find
It's inhabited by fools

— shazbat, Mar 21, 2009

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Region, Country: Norfolk, UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Kipling, T.S Eliot, Hilaire Belloc, Ogden Nash, Spike Milligan and many more.

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Ink Dragon

17 years 2 months ago

Hi John,

the fancy to read one of your pieces has struck me again, and once more I am laughing out loud! Like kailashana once remarked under one of your poems: "A cartoon within a cartoon" (if I remember her words correctly)! Yours, ~Nina
shazbat

shazbat

17 years 2 months ago

Nina, glad you stopped by,

Nina, glad you stopped by, it's good to know that this one made you smile. I do believe that you have remembered Kailashanas comment perfectly, once again thanks for reading. Regards John