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Anni's poem
this little pale-feeling memory, makes the sky bright
and lights up the quiet feelings again
like the smell of the Autumn leaves in mornings rain.
With this I identify, singing along,
you have taken me with you, your beautiful song.
And memories linger to soothe you just now
when you're painfully weak and your head takes a bow
but there in your heart is the strength that you gained
so it won't be so long till your love is reclaimed
the fires died down in the forests nearby
but the phoenix will rise again, sing your song high
all the world will be bright again, look at the sky!
Your friend Ann writes straight down here as I eat my
breakfast and look out of the window at the day. With love.
Inspired by Anni's poem which turned out not to be about herself.
Critiques
Morgana Tragic…
17 years 2 months ago
Hey Ann, As always, I love
brenda stuarts…
17 years 2 months ago
anni's poem
Cloudthings
17 years 2 months ago
Regardless of who it's about, it is really so beautiful
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Thank you Anni
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
Clouds of fire warming & passionate, god the sky was divine thsa
Baz
17 years 1 month ago
Anni's poem
Cloudthings
17 years 1 month ago
don't want to take credit for this lovely write! Ann is so deser