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The Ice Skater

Words flow smoothly

Modulated controlled

You skim the surface

Practiced in form

How easily you spin

Into my heart

As I dance with

Words on ice

 

In your pirouettes and stops

You lead me along

Following

Longing

Wondering

 

A lift by prayer

A mind that soars

A gentle drop

The blade skims ice

And glides

Fantasies unfold

A gentle weave

Patterns sketched

As your words

Unlock a frozen heart

 

Routine finished

Frozen time

You take your bows

As you leave the arena

Adulations

Bravo

How well you speak

 

A questioned posed

With a word

You lose your pace

The surface scratched

You hit a bump

Pull back

Words retraced

The ice cracks

And beneath

The icy waters flow

Torrents

Uncontained

Uncontrolled



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Ink Dragon

17 years 1 month ago

HI Kristeta,

I like this poem a lot. It is funny that we should both have written a poem with that theme. Take a look at http://www.neopoet.com/node/19827 Yours, ~Nina
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Shonna James

17 years 1 month ago

I really love this, it

I really love this, it provokes feelings of betrayal. Your ending makes me want to throw you an "angel ring". I especially like the lines; "A lift by prayer A mind that soars A gentle drop"