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Mar 24, 2009
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The Ice Skater
Words flow smoothly
Modulated controlled
You skim the surface
Practiced in form
How easily you spin
Into my heart
As I dance with
Words on ice
In your pirouettes and stops
You lead me along
Following
Longing
Wondering
A lift by prayer
A mind that soars
A gentle drop
The blade skims ice
And glides
Fantasies unfold
A gentle weave
Patterns sketched
As your words
Unlock a frozen heart
Routine finished
Frozen time
You take your bows
As you leave the arena
Adulations
Bravo
How well you speak
A questioned posed
With a word
You lose your pace
The surface scratched
You hit a bump
Pull back
Words retraced
The ice cracks
And beneath
The icy waters flow
Torrents
Uncontained
Uncontrolled
Comments
Ink Dragon
17 years 1 month ago
HI Kristeta,
Shonna James
17 years 1 month ago
I really love this, it