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A day of why

We the parents live on Our life will never be the same
Now that you have gone   I know your pain
Has cause you to fly But we love you so much
We need a chance
To say goodbye   One day you are here
Suddenly  you are gone We loved you so much
Both of us will cry
A thousand years long   Never will I blame you For that was your life
Your way to choose
  I have to cry  more
If you thought We didn't’ unconditionally
Give all to your heart
  We are sorry
If our life neglected to see The most precious moments
Your soul was in need
  My child has ended his life
Over the love he couldn't’ see So a thousand years
Our soul will bleed   To the babies  that are still alive Do you carrier this thought to end your life This is a fair question to you Is there a wish
Another choice you could choose? There is a million more choices to think about and use But the most important one
Is how much your family loves you
— press, Mar 20, 2009

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17 years 2 months ago

Press

form or from? has caused ( past tense) I'd cry even more If I didn't ( I would leave off the If Do you carry I would also suggest a shorter title There, using their is possessive Chrys