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On the Thresholds of Tomorrow

Writing down what comes to mind

sets the spirit free

when the shady gloom of reality

merges to ennui.[1]

To reflect upon a moment,

a thought that comes to mind,

brings together memories of

a once upon a time.

Sometimes in my reflections,

I bring about a worldly change,

a tidal force of inspiration, say,

at first it seems so strange.

I am a burning man with visions

of complex configurations,

delving deeply within myself,

resurgent aspirations.

Love is not a feeling,

it's an emotion deep within,

visual stimulations,

the mind begins to spin

into a myriad interpretations,

of love and life and death,

when every moment is precious,

and so gentle is each breath.

The dawning of the sun

brings hope to each new day;

on the thresholds of tomorrow,

old things will pass away.


[1] ennui – pronounced on·we


— The Poetic Knight, Mar 19, 2009

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Rett

Rett

17 years 2 months ago

Well, proves a person is never too old to learn

Not only did I enjoy the poem, but I learned a new word. A word I had heard all my life pronounced ennui (in you eye) so never bothered to look it up. Now I know it is pronounced on we. Thank you not only for a good read, but also teaching an old man something. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein
TK

The Poetic Knight

17 years 2 months ago

Rett---Thanks

Hello my friend. Thank you for the comment on my poem. Glad to hear you learned a new word!! Thanks for the appreciation. Now a quote back at you: "It does not do to leave a live dragon out of your calculations, if you near him." --J.R.R. Tolkien
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Ink Dragon

16 years 12 months ago

Hi Knight,

on my way to your website. Thanks again for the lesson in chat. A little birdie told me that you were not happy with the amount of feedback you have been getting on your poems. You know, I think I can see a few possible reasons for that: 1-If this poem is anything to go by, a lot of people will simply not understand your poems, as you are writing on a really high level. 2-How much have you commented yourself? The more comments you leave on others' work, the more comments you will get. 3-Have you been posting to the forum? The forum is often neglected by members, most people go straight for the stream. Yours, ~Nina