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Influenced by

 

 “INFLUENCED BY"

 

 

Influenced by nature, by nature, by nature

Its rhythms and songs, it bangs and its bongs

Its daytime so bright, its wistful dark night

Its mountains and streams, awakening dreams

Its valleys and woods, its nests and holes

Its moose, roe deer, rabbits and moles.

 

Maybe poetry of the past, lovers of nature too

As some of their genius may rub off, true

But mine is not so great as theirs, nevertheless

It is only mine and not any of thine Oh! Peers.

No pretentions goad me on to be a winner with my song

Just a joy of living long with all my faculties alert

 

To that which makes my heart beat fast

To carry me to my grave at last.

So precious those who help me on

Unknowing that they are, for me so dear

Gives me the spark of life that’s needed

That makes verse from the heart succeeded.

 

Or mix the colours of my brush

To wash the white page with its gloss

And maybe if I’m lucky then

Make someone happy with my pen;

Are you such ..................

If so my life’s flowing joys are whole

And I rejoice with all my soul.

Where ere we go there’s something good

And maybe that’s why we call it God.


— Nordic cloud, Mar 18, 2009

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 2 months ago

Anne, you certainly make me

Anne, you certainly make me happy with your pen! I find, such light and humour here and in your other work, I am left yours and smiling :), much love b x
Geezer

Geezer

17 years 2 months ago

influenced by

i like your little rhyming, 'though the pattern little odd. like fishing for a mackrel, and coming up with cod. still, i think you are infected. beginning stages 'cold'. i hope you catch the fever, if i may be so bold. send 'blank' message, ask him in the words of 'mae west';" why don't you come up and see me sometime" and send him the neopoet address. as always, gee.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

You're dead right Geezer

It is a little odd, it came so. I love your comment though, and my poem inspired that, so it was worth putting it in for you to see! Takk for the comment. And to you Julie I will only say that the end of the missing name rhymes with the lines. It might not be a good idea to publish it as he is a known person and ...well....I don't want to be sued for libel or whatever its called. He knows me, that's all I can say!!! Takk for the comment. Yours Ann