mom

a cold day it was, but, it don't matter now.
you warm me you are the best of the world.

a warm day so you cool me on that day.
so you a angel or a godess,or mom.
all of them. so you are my friend.and a good mom so you are a good angel.
or a good hood on a jacket.

A cold day it was, but it don't matter now.
you warmed me, you are the best in the world.

A warm day, so you cool me, wipe my fevered brow.
So good a mom, an angel,with your wings unfurled.

You are my jacket with the hood,
a godess, angel.......calm

You make me feel so good,
I really love you mom.

this was written in collaboration with my grandson Jason.

— Geezer, Mar 17, 2009

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Critiques

Albix

17 years 2 months ago

It's great when young people play with words to make poetry

As we say in Italy "blood is not water" or if you prefer " good blood don't lie". Best compliments to your grand-son, Geezer! And of course best compliments to you! Take care! albix

Geezer

17 years 2 months ago

blood and water

jason is a very sensitive boy of twelve but a little behind in his fine motor-skills. he has difficulty in writing and so too in composition but his ideas are so fine. i try to encourage him in every way possible so when he asked if he could post something, i told him that we could collaborate on this. he will be so pleased that we have gotten some feed-back. i am sure that he will be bugging me to see how many responses we get. i hope that more people will respond to us on this. i know how busy all so many of you are, but it will mean a lot to us. thank you so much, gee.

Morgana Tragic…

17 years 2 months ago

Awwwwwww!

I love any poems in tribute to moms! Geezer, this is sooo sweet. I love how she keeps you warm, like a hood. it's simple, but emotional and touching. Awesome, awesome. To moms everywhere! peace and love Katie

AlexaGrace

17 years 2 months ago

poem

so sweet and so true i love your poems all of them not one or two but every single one they are great you are a great poet

Geezer

17 years 2 months ago

sweet and true

whoa! me? just doing my thing.this was the product of a collaboration with my grandson,'jason'