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An Open Letter To Mr. Zapata

 I climb my wire basket.
I cut my heels on the sun
My peaches fall and 
bleeding sweat,
juice smoking red.
I two-step twenty foot fall
fences, Mr Zapata.
I cut my lips on silver wire
Dirt falls from my feet just
like a dog
I shout Zapatista, 
Zapata
I swallow dog water, Mr. Z
I swim my heels open 
I hear them chase and yell 
"Gringo Gringo Gringo" 
My oranges roll away home 
I whistle Zapata,  Zapatista
I blister in the sun 
Gringo Gringo Gringo
My oranges burn in the sun
I summer-salt my leather tongue burns 
Like the bottom of an empty shaker
Or cruel phantoms of salt 
I cough heavy silver shots
I tear my pesos like moons
I feel dog-breath wet and pant  
greasy moonlight 
I shout I remember, 
Senora I am broken between binoculars 
I hide them I hide my pesos I hide
an insect they glimmer like 
gouged eyes
covered in grime
I cross I break my voice
I sing Zapatista

I woke and dropped my water

It hisses like hot teeth 

I jingle I shake my pants loose 

I say I'm calling, Senor

Calling my Silver 

I see a big man he has crushed eyebrows 

I see his sunglasses smell air

I hear laughter like flying knives

I sing Zapata Zapatista I see his thumb

fat and green

I see he spits dominoes and

laughs shame like flies

I say I have shame like flies

I see his eyes burn ice

I say I Am Senor

I say I 

Call my silver

I see he plays hambone with guns

I say Senora my leg bitten

By dogs called federal

I am coming home

If I can slip through

This wire mesh and bars

The man outside he laughs

Time to eat

Gringo Gringo Gringo

I will starve with you

In seven years 

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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 1 month ago

Ahhhh, now THIS is poetry

Ahhhh, now THIS is poetry with an edge. The world needs poetry like this. Thank you. Bow. ~Anna "We have to try to get rid of the notion of time. And when you have an intense contact of love with nature or another human being, like a spark, then you understand that there is no time and that everything is eternal." Paulo Coelho
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 1 month ago

Gringo, gringo gringo

along we go gringo a rollocking, sollocking, crazy follolocking song of a poem that grabs and fantasts you to see the peculiar in dream-like mekuliquor dazed by your content but loved the music of your wonderfully rhythmical game with words. Oh what fun you had writing this down with a clown-dress on and a strange monster breathing down your neck! Quillsvein, the pig with the flying plume de ma tante! No insult intended just using the words. Ann the Troll from Norway
whitetea

whitetea

17 years 1 month ago

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you really know how to pick words. most of what i read is written in past tense. writing this in present tense made it become more active and flavored. i am very impressed. wow.