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DarkinAZ
Mar 17, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Here I Am

Here I am Lord,
broken and displaced
everyone I love
I seem to have pushed away...

Here I sit Lord,
so saddened and alone
without a hand to hold
just my shattered dreams...

running down my face,
and no one to blame but me.

Here I am Lord,
so full of anger and shame
and my will to carry on
is detiorating, with each passing day.

Here I sit Lord,
just wanting to be loved
missing my father
and my son...

while my girl picks up the pieces
I'll cut myself with the broken ones.

Here I am Lord
bleeding on the floor
submerged in my failures
knocking on heavens door.

Here I sit Lord
broken and displaced
saddened and alone
angry and ashamed...

just wanting to be loved
bleeding on the floor.



— DarkinAZ, Mar 17, 2009

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Kgotlello

17 years 2 months ago

i feel your pain

I have one thing to say that stop crusifying yourself because of your past. We all make mistakes and none of us are perfect. When you cried out to the Lord the first time He knew what you wanted to say even before you said it. Get up from the shame that is keeping you from going forward and rise up from your guilt for what you have been asking for has been given unto you.
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Janice Pearce

17 years 2 months ago

Here I Am

Mark, Keep writing and you will find an answer to what you need, Take care, look for inner strength, your Neopoet family loves you! ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
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Cynthia Henson

16 years 9 months ago

Hey Mark

It's been awhile since you wrote this and you have come along way since then. Let go and let God's will be done in your life. Love you !