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Mar 16, 2009
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Claps and Whistles
Claps and Whistles
Every effort of mine went to fail
I did them well with my whole heart
They went to fail and made me to cry
I have given my strain and time to win
I was placed as a looser before fools
and vagabonds
They laughed and scolded me to my loss
I have been defeated, yes
I have been defeated by Him and Time
What for? and
Why did I have been pushed?
To the hell of my failure
I asked Him repeatedly
Mute is a reply received from Him
There is a garland came to head
for my historic victory in my field
Claps and whistles placed me in the
Heaven of fame
There I received His reply as claps and
Whistles
— SAKTHEEE2007, Mar 16, 2009
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