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Claps and Whistles

Claps and Whistles

 

Every effort of mine went to fail

I did them well with my whole heart

They went to fail and made me to cry

I have given my strain and time to win

I was placed as a looser before fools

                                 and vagabonds

They laughed and scolded me to my loss

I have been defeated, yes

I have been defeated by Him and Time

What for? and

Why did I have been pushed?

To the hell of my failure

I asked Him repeatedly

Mute is a reply received from Him

 

  There is a garland came to head

  for my historic victory in my field

  Claps and whistles placed me in the

                             Heaven of fame

 There I received His reply as claps and

                                       Whistles

 


— SAKTHEEE2007, Mar 16, 2009

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