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Mar 14, 2009
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Where I was zero as a man
All my efforts have ended there and
Nothing is in my hands
I am in the last second of my life and
I am standing alone as weak
To share my pains and to get help
None is there and nothing before my eyes
My heart struggles to inhale air and
My throat cries to a mouthful water
Acute thirst and absolute heat
Prepares me to go out
There I heard a call There I felt his hands
They did me a lot and they taught me more
My wisdom has enlightened
Where I was zero as a man
— SAKTHEEE2007, Mar 14, 2009
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Geezer
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