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Where I was zero as a man

All my efforts have ended there and

Nothing is in my hands

I am in the last second of my life and

I am standing alone as weak

To share my pains and to get help

None is there and nothing before my eyes

My heart struggles to inhale air and

My throat cries to a mouthful water

Acute thirst and absolute heat

Prepares me to go out

There I heard a call There I felt his hands

They did me a lot and they taught me more

My wisdom has enlightened

Where I  was zero as a man

 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Mar 14, 2009

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Geezer

Geezer

17 years 2 months ago

zero

liked your title,and great introspection. your theme was consistent throughout. well put!