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If I.....
like a bird
to glide on the thermals
up high in the blue,
be tossed by the four winds
and soothed by my seashore kin,
to see all the world
in one
like the sun;
be rained on, be hailed on
be driven to hide,
in bushes, in fir trees
in snow;
but I'm only human
and live on the ground
so how could I ever know
if I
could fly?
In the next life maybe
it will be the norm
to go flying about like ghosts;
or to join the chorus
of angels,
and take part in the
heavenly hosts
I doubt they exist.
so don't get so pissed
It was only a thought I had now,
and its all make-believe
anyhow.
If I didn't exist
it would be like the fist
of those pruned trees
in Amsterdam
angrily growing new beards
as you watch
and when they're cut of
I would scream
in their dream;
but then I am not
a tree in a pot
of concrete aside on the path
I'll die of exhaust
and my leaves will
fall off,
and all that is left
is an
aftermath.
Critiques
Kailashana
17 years 2 months ago
“all that is left is an
Conect11
17 years 2 months ago
hey Ann,
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Hei Marko
Geezer
17 years 2 months ago
winds
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
No I don't believe in angels
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
My beautiful sunset girl, thank you
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Oh you paint such a picture Julie
Janice Pearce
17 years 2 months ago
If I
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Birds LOVE bushes
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Dear Janice
Rett
17 years 2 months ago
Ann, you have outdone yourself
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
It was your idea Rett?
Electric Blue
17 years 2 months ago
If I