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The Magic of Hope

I know of an empty field that's completely full of the "void",
and said "void" is full of nothing but weeds.
So very vacant was this lot,

that even the wind would not waste it's time.
For extremely silent were the trees
and even quieter were their branches.

Also, were the tumbleweeds still and absent of any animation
as they sat, perched stolidly without a single destination in mind.

It was as if all of the foliage,
being mostly an odd-ball, sort of collection
of trees-few, starter plants and seedlings, and weeds a-plenty,

were merely patiently waiting to join the many plants of the dead;
you know, the ones that cease their growing yield
because of the lack of nutrients and incentives of their existence;

from the curse expelled by mother nature...
..of course, that was until the healing rains arrived.

After that magical day, I spied a wondrous meadow!
For, the soil and all of it's counterparts had finally been nourished,
and they collectively turned their backs on the realm of death,

and came back to life, finally erasing the curse that had been depriving them.
And then, pride clearly was evident in the plant's and tree's skeletal persona's;
for they all sorely needed the nourishment, fresh water, and the presence of change in the weather.

and not too soon after, there appeared the most beautiful of rainbows, as a promise from mother nature...
..for with one stroke of her brush.....she had skillfuly painted the field with the magic......the magic of "Hope".

— docmaverick, Mar 11, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Antoinette Mar…

17 years 3 months ago

wonderful lady...

This Mother Nature and a beautifully descriptive write...It started my day with that very same magic.....Hope
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 3 months ago

The Magic of Hope

I could see that barren field, the way you described it Doc,and the lifeless trees. And with that stroke of a brush we get lush new beginnings. Nicely written~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous