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Jesse,

I've had something to tell you for quite awhile,  there something about your daughter's smile:-)I tried ignore the truth, because it is easier,  but when I see her grin, you deserve to hear. You may be my annoying younger brother,   but still you know me more than any other.And when I think of how we had to grow up,   your the only one that might even give a fuck. It's hard to tell you that you make me proud,  our childhood sibling rivalry was usually loud.I know you blame me for some of your pain,  and the lasting effect's will always remain.    But when I see you two laughing on the floor,  smiling and tickling without a thought of before.You make my heart swell for what you've done,  you're showing your little girl that she is the one. Our Dad, as you know, could not offer us that,  he could never step up and take his turn at bat.So it truly is a miracle to see you so involved,  to witness your caring and determined resolve.

 You have given your Daughter what we never knew,
   a Father who care's and who will always be there too.
 Your sweet Abigail is lucky, and I am so very glad.
   Not every father has what it takes, to be a good Dad.
  Love your Sister, Julie
 3/11/09 D.D.

For my brother Jesse.  
— DawningDaytripper, Mar 11, 2009

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Region, Country: Robe valley, WA, USA

Favorite Poets: All of them, for differant reasons. Neopoet poets have influenced me the most over the last 2 plus years. Great teachers. Edgar Allen Poe, Dickens, way to many to list...

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JoJo

17 years 3 months ago

private subject

Such a private write that many can attest. An internal sibling tribute. The words are strong. The message of love is deep. It was touching.
Rett

Rett

17 years 2 months ago

Julie, this is great

Really heartfelt and your last line really enforces the absoluteness of it all! Great job except for two or three nitpicks only. your(you're) the only one that might even give a fuck. and the lasting effect’s(effects) will always remain. a Father who care’s(cares) and who will always be there too. I have to give this a 5. Fine job. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water." "A Democracy can withstand anything but Democrats." Robert A. Heinlein