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Addicted

Give us a light, I could murder a smoke

Come on now mate, this isn’t a joke

I haven’t had had one for a couple of days

And I’m walking about in a kind of a haze

My brain just won’t function till I’ve had a hit

I know that its bad, but I don’t give a shit

My body is trembling, my mind's turned to mush

I just need to feel that nicotine rush

One more cigarette that’s all that I ask

Then you can continue performing your task

Just let me have my last nicotine fix

Then ferry me, Charon, over the Styx

© John W Fenn 09-03-2009

— shazbat, Mar 10, 2009

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Region, Country: Norfolk, UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Kipling, T.S Eliot, Hilaire Belloc, Ogden Nash, Spike Milligan and many more.

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faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 3 months ago

This poem made me smile,

This poem made me smile, i'm a smoker myself (gave up for a bit when i had my daughter but it pulled me back in!!) anyone who has or still does smoke will know just where your coming from!! Take care b x
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NEW ERA

17 years 3 months ago

Have to have my NICOTINE!!!

I'm a die hard smoker, sorry for the bad pun. I probably smoke a pack a day and know the feeling of needing that fix. I enjoyed how you versed it. It'll probably be the death of me. Till then....Love Cathy
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loveyu74848

17 years 3 months ago

i believe all smokers

i believe all smokers everywhere can relate... i enjoyed this very much...
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 2 months ago

John

Yep, that exactly how it is...took three heart attacks, surgery and an irate cardiologist, wife and family all threatening to kick my ass, before I finally quit! Excellent write Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
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IRENE

17 years 2 months ago

Irene

your poem made me smile i have never smoked ,but watch my husband trying to give up ,unfortunately he had to nearly lose his life befor making the final commitment to do so ,great read regards Irene
shazbat

shazbat

17 years 2 months ago

giving up is easy, I do it

giving up is easy, I do it several times a day, seriously though, I've been trying to pack up for ages and I keep failing. Thanks for all your comments. John