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Mar 10, 2009
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Addicted
Give us a light, I could murder a smoke
Come on now mate, this isn’t a joke
I haven’t had had one for a couple of days
And I’m walking about in a kind of a haze
My brain just won’t function till I’ve had a hit
I know that its bad, but I don’t give a shit
My body is trembling, my mind's turned to mush
I just need to feel that nicotine rush
One more cigarette that’s all that I ask
Then you can continue performing your task
Just let me have my last nicotine fix
Then ferry me, Charon, over the Styx
© John W Fenn 09-03-2009
— shazbat, Mar 10, 2009
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Critiques
faerybeki
17 years 3 months ago
This poem made me smile,
NEW ERA
17 years 3 months ago
Have to have my NICOTINE!!!
loveyu74848
17 years 3 months ago
i believe all smokers
Race_9togo
17 years 2 months ago
John
IRENE
17 years 2 months ago
Irene
shazbat
17 years 2 months ago
giving up is easy, I do it