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Charade in Review

The masks we wear, to us are given,
assigned to us before our cue.
The choice is ours to reveal or hide-
A grand charade with many a clue.

Would you be this or be you that;
Is it surfaced or is it hidden?
Not all secrets are lies or deceit,
Our view of others we must widen.

The genuine heart will itself reveal
Its spots or stripes are where they're at.
The lot of what we think we see,
provide but circumstantial caveat.

We often discard what eyes can't see;
Too often distrust what hearts conceal.
The masquerade of life continues,
Its colours and shapes our truths congeal.
— crypticbard, Mar 10, 2009

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Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

Cryptic

words again in a very good piece there, you cannot hide from yourself but it is fun sometimes to do it to others, don't make it a habit, or you will end up wearing one, lol, Take care down there ,Yours Ian.T PS:-"Charade of View" could be a title for you, to play, on the sights and words you see, but who will the person that you are to be.....
Frederick Kesner

Frederick Kesner

17 years 2 months ago

Trying out the 'Reply' feature

Again dear sir, my gratitude. I may just use ‘Charade of View,’ with your kind permission of course. That might just be the ticket for this poem. And from you most welcome comments there seems to be a couple more poems brewing on the horizon with regards to charades and the wearing of masks. Cheers.
S

S.KEENE

17 years 2 months ago

enjoyed this thank you

i wear a mask frequently. i only have 2 or 3 friends i feel absolutley comfortable being my complete self with...of course the "real" me comes through in my writting. i really liked this one made me pause and think..have a good day.
Frederick Kesner

Frederick Kesner

17 years 2 months ago

Thanks

Thanks for your kind words and the time that you spend with my poetry. Yes, I think we all do wear masks at certain times for certain reasons. We may even be unaware of it on occasion. Good that we can all pause a while and have a moment of thought. Cheers, CB