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KISSSSS!!

peck, peck,peck........KISSSSS!!
off to work you go.

did i  tell you today,  how much i love you?
do you know the satisfaction and joy,  that you bring my every dawn?


you make me want the world to know, with a voice so loud, so loud,
like a summer thunder.

your soul and mine, so intertwined,
like the vines of my multicolored " morning glories",
in my little garden.

the dreary days with rain that fall into our lives,
only  serves to refresh us,  when the sun comes back again.

experience, and understanding nurtures our relationship,and we use it to grow.

what would i do, if you did not come home today?
— Geezer, Mar 10, 2009

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

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faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 3 months ago

I like this little poem,

I like this little poem, filled with such love as it is. What a lucky girl to have such a nice geezer :) take care bx
Geezer

Geezer

17 years 3 months ago

KISSSSS !!

i am the lucky one. she is the reason that i am still sane. i couldn't imagine life without her. thank you for the kind comments. gee.
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 3 months ago

Expression on a whim, lovely affirmation of adoration

Oh, I adore this Gee, lovely whimsical excuse to express your adoration... fantastic, you good man... she is lucky, you both are. A good fun & heart warming write my friend. Anni "Out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I will meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about ideas, language, and even the phrase, "each other" doesn't make any sense."
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Unusual shape

This poem has but it seems to work in spite of that and says so fully how you feel, how happy you must be and will always be I feel. Yours Ann
Geezer

Geezer

17 years 3 months ago

KISSSSS!!

the unusual shape that this poem has, is the result of the first and last thought being being the only two thoughts that ran through my head when i dropped her at work yesterday. i felt the need to express myself more fully. i am so glad tha everyone can see how much i love her. just what was intended! gee. by the way, anyone can call me "guy" if they are so inclined, i just feel more like the personna the i show here is more suited to "gee"
phoenixflame

phoenixflame

17 years 2 months ago

Wowza

Very jubilant. It made me smile, the girl must be a lucky one!
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 11 months ago

I just went back to....

I just went back to check on all my older stuff and found your comment. Thank you! I know it took a long time to get back to you but really wanted you to know that your comments were appreciated. Thanks again.~ Geezer