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Mar 10, 2009
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Losses and Gains
Losses and Gains
Lesser is the lost
Gains are greater
Death is a boon and
curse is our birth
Palace is the jail and
Heaven is our hut
Safer is our rags and
silk materials are risky
Weeping is good ,
Worst is our laugh
Prayer is the way
Deadend is our pride
Gardens and deserts are here
Choose to your mind
May be it a garden or
may be it your desert
Garden may become desert and
Desert may become a garden
Changes will not change as our
Father'slove
Lesser is the lost
Gains are greater
Death is a boon and
curse is our birth
Palace is the jail and
Heaven is our hut
Safer is our rags and
silk materials are risky
Weeping is good ,
Worst is our laugh
Prayer is the way
Deadend is our pride
Gardens and deserts are here
Choose to your mind
May be it a garden or
may be it your desert
Garden may become desert and
Desert may become a garden
Changes will not change as our
Father'slove
— SAKTHEEE2007, Mar 10, 2009
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