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When Ghosts Whisper

when I feel life’s force
drifting far away
too tired to lift my head
from the pillow
then is when
I should most probably pray
when ghosts whisper
from the weeping willow
then is when
there’s little to do
but pray
and wait
for thermodynamics to work
energy changes
with the loss of day
heat dissipates
into phantoms
that lurk
cold
as the grave stone
icy
earth and clay
then is when
there’s little
left for gloom to do
but lurk
and wait
forever
choice freely given
to leave       
I shall soar
to heights above
muck and murk                  
ride the wings of angels
into heaven
languish no longer
in the realm of work
fly towards warmth
one cannot imagine   
— deelilah, Mar 10, 2009

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Region, Country: Northwest USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.E. Cummings, Robert W. Service, Emily Dickenson

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Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 2 months ago

Deelilah

And I thought I was the only one who likes to pray while on the edge of sleep! Absolutely beautiful. "then is when" is a wonderful line, and I love how you use it. last part - soaring - is really good. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Tonya

Tonya

17 years 2 months ago

when I feel life’s

when I feel life’s force drifting far away too tired to lift my head from the pillow then is when I should most probably pray when ghosts whisper I love your opening lines.. and what a comforting thought. To cheat the gloom and muck and murk, for much better things await when our own tempertures cool. Just as the earth does when its lights are turned out for the night. Very beautiful poem, real, down to earth! Always Sincere, Tonya
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 2 months ago

Yea...

what they said... really! warming thoughts from your pen here and I was fond of the "then is when" too... worked very well within this write...enjoyed the read... Richard
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 2 months ago

Jim, Tonya, and Richard

'This is when' I Thank you for the kind words. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. My own personal favorite line: 'languish no longer in the realm of work fly towards warmth one cannot imagine' Right now I could really get into both those concepts. Yours, Deelilah
Tonya

Tonya

17 years 2 months ago

That is a very comforting

That is a very comforting thought 'languish no longer.... once cannot imagine'.... ahhhhhhhh, one day Deelilah, one day. Till then, we toil along and endure, loving what we have and thankful for it. (There were many great lines in this write, it all worked so well together) Yours, Tonya
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 2 months ago

When Ghosts Whisper

Beautiful Poem Dee! Reminds me of a song: "I Can Only Imagine" Thanks for sharing with us~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
deelilah

deelilah

17 years 2 months ago

Hi Janice,

Thanks for the read and the comment. Long time, no see. It took me a while to get back in the groove. Too much to do while taking time off at home. Back on the road now with nothing to do but eat, sleep, or drive. Although, I should be writing instead of kibitzing. One advantage of the electronic age is the wireless internet-laptop that I can play on while bouncing down the road. I always love to hear from you. Yours, Dee