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Mar 10, 2009
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When Ghosts Whisper
when I feel life’s force
drifting far away
too tired to lift my head
from the pillow
then is when
I should most probably pray
when ghosts whisper
from the weeping willow
then is when
there’s little to do
but pray
and wait
for thermodynamics to work
energy changes
with the loss of day
heat dissipates
into phantoms
that lurk
cold
as the grave stone
icy
earth and clay
then is when
there’s little
left for gloom to do
but lurk
and wait
forever
choice freely given
to leave
I shall soar
to heights above
muck and murk
ride the wings of angels
into heaven
languish no longer
in the realm of work
fly towards warmth
one cannot imagine
drifting far away
too tired to lift my head
from the pillow
then is when
I should most probably pray
when ghosts whisper
from the weeping willow
then is when
there’s little to do
but pray
and wait
for thermodynamics to work
energy changes
with the loss of day
heat dissipates
into phantoms
that lurk
cold
as the grave stone
icy
earth and clay
then is when
there’s little
left for gloom to do
but lurk
and wait
forever
choice freely given
to leave
I shall soar
to heights above
muck and murk
ride the wings of angels
into heaven
languish no longer
in the realm of work
fly towards warmth
one cannot imagine
— deelilah, Mar 10, 2009
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Race_9togo
17 years 2 months ago
Deelilah
Tonya
17 years 2 months ago
when I feel life’s
themoonman
17 years 2 months ago
Yea...
deelilah
17 years 2 months ago
Jim, Tonya, and Richard
Tonya
17 years 2 months ago
That is a very comforting
Janice Pearce
17 years 2 months ago
When Ghosts Whisper
deelilah
17 years 2 months ago
Hi Janice,