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Here did lie a work of great importance. That is until the forest blew a breath and its fallen brother rose to allow it to slip through the pain of protective glass and yet another of its fallen brothers. A gust of great evil entered my home and swallowed this paper whole. You see if I had another way , I would let the woodland stand and pen my works in the sand . But hell, recall that pained glass upon the sill. Now I tremble, quiver and quake as I resign my pen to mother natures will.
— theladyblue, Mar 08, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

Lady Blue

A compact work that covers many strands, that runs from the mighty tree to the racing pencil, A very good imaginative write. Yours Ian.T
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 3 months ago

warning shot

Both imaginative and beautifully written~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
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JoJo

17 years 2 months ago

I like it

this poem is full of substance. It speaks to you.