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Mar 06, 2009
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Bleed your words upon my eyes
The ink that runs through your veins
Staining my retinas
Tattooing images across my vision
Into my ears place those murmurs
Of pain, that I may hear the
Wounds that whisper ever near
Your surface, in eternal eddies
Upon my skin, blend your
Palette of colors till one
Shade merges with the next
Then,
I am complete
Submerged
An opaque reflection
Of your essence
— Tonya, Mar 06, 2009
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Barbara Writes
17 years 3 months ago
so do I great write
Tonya
17 years 3 months ago
Thank you Barbara. I am
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Tonya...
Tonya
17 years 3 months ago
Ya know Richard, theres
Morgana Tragic…
17 years 3 months ago
Beautifully written, love
loveyu74848
17 years 3 months ago
ahh aunt tawn so
Tonya
17 years 3 months ago
SWEET! i was worried after