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IKnowNoBox
Mar 06, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Soggy Conversion

dodging dribble drips
baptism by melancholy
splashing drops blotch cardboard
a  Rorschach test for moods
taunting stagnate imaginations
a torrent turns to mist
soaked parers blurred
as drought dry lands draw moisture
springs guzzle elixir
chocolate colored puddles
reflect a bakers sun 
thirsty vines, and fungi
await the next gray cloud sermon


— IKnowNoBox, Mar 06, 2009

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Region, Country: East Coast, USA

Favorite Poets: Weird Elf, Shel Silverstein, The Poet Anonymous

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

David...

at first read I thought this was about baptism, and then I thought it was about crying... I can usually see where a poem is going but maybe I lost my thinking cap because I'm at a loss... rostric... I couldn't find it on-line and wasn't sure what it is... can you help un-fuddle an old man? Richard
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 3 months ago

Soggy Conversation

I am with Moon here David. Guess my mind is befuddled~ Baptisism was my thought here. ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous
Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 3 months ago

Soggy Conversion

My next guess, mental capabilities? Just a guess David You are a master~ ______________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous