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Tea Time

 I don't have time for the pontification

you choose the subject

and then expound on the same

at  length

I know it's your nature

to love to talk

 

 

I guess I must seem

like a good listener

but I'm really more interested 

in my cup of  black tea

and the shaft of  late afternoon
sunlight angling in
from the side window

 

 

And yet, here we sit

you,in your chair

and I, on the cat's sofa

your voice reflecting

from the window behind me

around the room and

back to your ears

 

after a while it's time

to fill up the pipe

you pack in the herb 

and carefully spark the match

the predictable routine

continues, and I, as always

decline the offer

 

The conversation proceeds

or at least it goes on,

and on

like a one way street

 

but I am enjoying 

the smoky atmosphere

and the resonant acoustics

of your sitting room

 

There is always 

a strange kind of feeling

after I  leave

I have too many things 

that need to be done

 

but our visit was a 

pleasurable interlude

even If I couldn't

get a word in edgeways

If I wanted to



— Edevold, Mar 06, 2009

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JoJo

17 years 3 months ago

I got into this poem. It

I got into this poem. It appears to have individuality. twenty reader's could get twenty different character's. This gave it that special touch. The flow was great even to the point of the chattiness.
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loveyu74848

17 years 3 months ago

i enjoyed it also… could

i enjoyed it also... could picture myself sitting there watching the smoke tendrils... and wishing they were intresting enough to listen to but being happy they don't seem to notice... lol
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 3 months ago

Edevold...

made me feel as if I was sitting there with you... I've been the listener for much of the time... I tend to give the floor away to those that want it...need it...enjoyed the poem very much! Richard
Edevold

Edevold

17 years 3 months ago

Thanks for commenting on my poem

I really appreciate it, and also I am glad you enjoyed reading it and each seemed to have a bit of a different take. I just try to be as honest as possible about taking my own thoughts and rendering them into printed line, and after posting a poem I always wonder where the poem will rate on the "tripe-o-meter" scale. But I appreciate your comments, I'm just glad my efforts don't suck too much....