soooo...sweet!

WOW! that blew me away, such a raw emotion,
i knew that there was something there,
it's like a magic potion.

i am honored that you try to bridge the gap,
and touch my soul, mayhap.

a bomb of thoughts touch what's me,
lets my brain go wild so easily.

catalyst and pusher too,
it is a drug i am addicted to.

cannot post but once a day,
think, myself, it's the better way.

i think to love it to it's most,
would surely make an overdose!!!

— Geezer, Mar 06, 2009

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Critiques

loveyu74848

17 years 3 months ago

lol… i think more than

lol... i think more than once a day and we would all go crazy...

Cloudthings

17 years 3 months ago

Light & bright

Maybe... but I sure know what you mean Gee Guide... This is a fun write & light & bright it is. Goodness knows we'd never sleep anyway. Cheers Anni "Out beyond the ideas of wrongdoing and rightdoing, there is a field. I will meet you there. When the soul lies down in that grass, the world is too full to talk about ideas, language, and even the phrase, "each other" doesn't make any sense."

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Great stuff

I liked this and I too feel we use too much time here, some of us, specially me who am at home, we said yesterday jokingly tomorrow is Sunday whoopee its a free day! Joke as every day is a free day, aren't we lucky, but the other things that come with old age are not so pleasant, so.....! Yours Ann

S.KEENE

17 years 2 months ago

very nice

i liked this alot. if i had time i would spend more time at this site. i love reading what others have written it gives me ideas about how i can change and improve my own writtings. and i just really enjoy a good writtiing book,poem,song, anything.. i enjoyed this thank you.