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Mar 06, 2009
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Two or three pounds of steel
Two or three pounds of steel
Will react to what is a man’s will
And I know our forefathers
Gave us that right
For in there times this gun may save their life
For each round of gun pouter that you use
Might be a life that a baby will lose
To many times we have use this steel
Is it your right to pull but do we have to kill?
For what your car or money our fathers write
But know that this steel will take someone’s life
PART 2
If you are brave and strong
You would really thing pass the way of this gun
There should be more love that might say
That these things I cannot take with me
No human life should pay
— press, Mar 06, 2009
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Geezer
17 years 3 months ago
two or pounds of steel.