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Mar 04, 2009
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The Waterfall's Mist
A mile and a half hike
up the trail
the river in the canyon
down below
I get to the falls
finally
it's rained the whole way
and I'm wet, but not cold
and there it is
the waterfall
and a couple is standing at the rail
and the lady says
oooh! look at the mist
it's so beautiful
but I like to look at the river
tumbling downstream
and feel the energy
the crash and the mist
of the waterfall
at my back
— Edevold, Mar 04, 2009
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infinite_dwarf
17 years 3 months ago
Ahhh
Arrow
17 years 3 months ago
I like this.